Scale: 1-5. 5: excellent; 1: very bad
Overall: 4
What I have learnt:
Improvement on overcoming stage fright and presenting in a group. After the presentation, I realize that I also have the potential to add creativity into formal presentation. I was surprised at the numerous ideas I brainstormed for the skit. It was an enriching learning experience.
Preparation: 4
Strengths:
Clear and logic way of putting the content into slides with minimal number of words. Efficient preparation. Able to use animated diagram and flow charts to illustrate points. The preparation of the skit component was efficiently done.
Weaknesses:
Didn’t standardize the format and design of the slides prior to preparation; therefore compilation of the slides was a bit inefficient.
Delivery of the content: 3
Strengths:
Transition between presenters was smooth and natural. Voice projection was good. Still tried to appear confident and enthusiastic though feeling a bit nervous.
Weaknesses:
Arrived late at the venue and took a relatively long time to get ready. This may have resulted a bad impression on us. Poor management of the slides, e.g. I accidentally did a left-click for at least twice. Time management was also an issue. I could have talked a bit faster.
Q & A: 4
Strengths:
Being very familiar with the content, we were able to understand what the questions asked and offer relevant information and answers.
Weaknesses:
The answers could be supplemented.
Hi Xiaoxing,
ReplyDeleteThe skit was pretty well done. It gave the audience a good idea of what some foreign students experience when they first come to NUS. However, I do not know how appropriate it is for a formal proposal presentation, because a skit may appear as though its too informal.
The animation in your slides was really good. It helped emphasize the important points, and anchored those points well.
In terms of delivery, I felt you could have done more. You could have altered your tone more and placed more emphasis on the important words. However, the overall was still good, and it turned out to be a very impressive and persuasive presentation.
Generally, you are someone who exudes confidence and strength. It is not difficult for you to appear confident, because you look confident naturally. Good job on the presentation.